Excellent story, Matt! Very well-paced from beginning to end. I think the character work is very, very well done. You know, I was really skeptical when I found out that this was an Artemis story, because I see her character butchered all the time in fanfiction, but I think you wrote her very well. The ending was very impactful, and I just had a great time reading throughout. Thank you for writing this, and I hope you enjoy the review that I’ll write for the archive, whenever that comes out.
I’m glad you enjoyed it and thanks for pointing out the couple of typos you spotted along the way. I look forward to reading your deconstruction of my interpretation and exploration of Hellenic ethnos 😉
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Excellent story, Matt! Very well-paced from beginning to end. I think the character work is very, very well done. You know, I was really skeptical when I found out that this was an Artemis story, because I see her character butchered all the time in fanfiction, but I think you wrote her very well. The ending was very impactful, and I just had a great time reading throughout. Thank you for writing this, and I hope you enjoy the review that I’ll write for the archive, whenever that comes out.
– Theo
Thanks Theo!
I’m glad you enjoyed it and thanks for pointing out the couple of typos you spotted along the way. I look forward to reading your deconstruction of my interpretation and exploration of Hellenic ethnos 😉
Matt
Whoa… this is now one of my all time favorites in all the books I have read. I’m definitely doing my long write on this.
– TheGirlofManyFloods
(aka Silver Moon)
Glad you liked it, Silver!