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  1. TC1687 TC1687

    I groaned when I read “Le Cancrelat can wait a few days”. With the number of times I’ve heard that line I was wondering why Harry wasn’t getting annoyed lol. I’m looking forward to the next!

    • One of the downsides of my immersion-based writing style is that when the character is frustrated, by extension so must all the readers be. This works really well for almost every other emotion (and can work with frustration so long as the eventual satisfaction feels worth it and there’s progression) but those who don’t trust me to deliver may bail before the pay-off. This is probably the most risk I’ve take with a story in that regard, so I really appreciate the constant reviews to let me know where the balance is falling for you. It’s hugely helpful. Thank you!

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