1. This chapter is kind of disjointed from the what happened in the last chapter, Harry wanted to quit his job but didn’t because of the dufort sisters but after helping them why did he not quit? It just shifts from that to Harry being in Malta again, it feels like there is a chapter or something missing that explains this discrepancy🤔.

    1. He basically agreed to quit if there was any risk, so he should’ve quit before going to Belgium, but of course it was the Duforts, and now even though he’s back on Malta he and we know there’s no risk because of the blood wards. It’s possible this is one of those moments where I should be ever so slightly sneaky with my use of perspective to engineer a helpful piece of internal dialogue to show it’s a continuation of the same mindset he had pre-Belgium. See what everyone thinks as they read through!

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